Your sense of space and scale is wonderful. The color-palette is also very strong. When you shoot architecture, make sure you pay close attention to the lens bowing. Your shots here look good, but you want the grandness of the architecture to play off the ephemeral movement of the crowd, I am interested in the shots that have excess ceiling. However, I think the most successful shot here is the bottom shot, which juxtaposes the empty hall with the shadowy forms. You might consider shooting during rush hour. The focus on the top shot feels too incidental. You want to find a balance between the composition and the meaning of the shot. Here, I am not sure why the arm rail is the center of focus. All in all, these shots mark a good start to the semester!
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Your sense of space and scale is wonderful. The color-palette is also very strong. When you shoot architecture, make sure you pay close attention to the lens bowing. Your shots here look good, but you want the grandness of the architecture to play off the ephemeral movement of the crowd, I am interested in the shots that have excess ceiling. However, I think the most successful shot here is the bottom shot, which juxtaposes the empty hall with the shadowy forms. You might consider shooting during rush hour. The focus on the top shot feels too incidental. You want to find a balance between the composition and the meaning of the shot. Here, I am not sure why the arm rail is the center of focus. All in all, these shots mark a good start to the semester!
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